After working 3 years for a govt. organization when I
started trying in other companies for better salary, the HR person in a reputed
product based company denied to accept my experience of 3 years and therefore
happy to negotiate the salary down.
He said that my first company was not giving him
confirmation that I worked there. At first, I thought this might be part of
negotiation tactics but later he showed me the mail communication. They simply
said that they don’t have any record with the person's name ever worked in
their organization.
I got pissed off and wrote a mail to vice president there. Result
was awesome. Within half an hour, the HR dept. got my records and confirmed
back.
That was the power of an effective email. Emails are the
most used medium of communication now a days in business.
The simple rule of writing effective email is - write clear,
brief message to relevant people.
Always start with understanding the recipients, the content
of the message, and then what is that you want in return. This could be any
confirmation or information or someone to work on something. At end of mail,
write your signature including your name, mobile number, mail id, designation
and company name.
The next important is subject line. It should be summary of
your message. Just at the subject line, recipients should understand that it should
be just an information or some actions are also expected. e.g. FYI - I will be
on leave tomorrow, Action Required: Complete the training by EOD
Keep all those in CC who are not directly impacted with your
message however they certainly need to be informed. Avoid keeping any one in
BCC. Why do you want someone else be aware about this communication without
others knowing about this? Still if you want, keep him in BCC.
Use return receipt only when you want a confirmation back
about your message being read.
Don't use all capital or all bold unless you really want to
shout on the recipient. Don’t use red font unless you want to highlight risk. Do
use other colors if you want to draw attention on some of the information
separately.
E-mails are the communication that can be used as an
evidence years later so never send or reply mail with emotions. Never send or
reply fuming mails immediately. Give yourself some time to cool down.
Sarcasm should be avoided as it can be interpreted
differently by different people.
Never send emails without proof-reading. Check for grammar, relevance,
clarity and the reason why it is necessary to send mail. In case you are sending
some important mail, get it reviewed with your colleague or friend.
Writing good emails is a strength; try to master this art.
Seeds of thoughts:
Consider that you have ordered a gas stove from Flipkart and
they have not delivered the model that you actually ordered. You called them
but didn't get satisfactory response. Now you want them to take this item back
and return your money. Write a mail to their customer support department and
write an escalation mail also if they don’t seem to revert on your concern.
- Amit Roop
No comments:
Post a Comment